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PostSubject: Body Crusher Enterprises   Sun Feb 26, 2012 3:26 am

Ok well this is a great forum so why not advertise my Online story here. Body Crusher Enterprises is an online episodic scifi and action story. The story has two authors Christopher Holl (me) and Maxx Hillery (my best friend). We always loved reading scifi and action novels and mangas. We were inspired by Stephen King, many different Mangas, and Coheed and Cambria!

Preview of our story below.

This story takes place in the year 2016. The world is not much different then ours now just a few new pieces of technology here and there. The main character of the story is Trigger, a 17 year old male who live in Exeter, Rode Island.

At first he lives a normal life with a mother, father and older sister. He has two friends he spends most of his time at school with. One day at school Trigger is outside during a free period and he sees a strange man in a red and black hooded trench coat. This man Trigger sees is walking a cross a wooden fence. The strange thing about this was that the man walked along the fence like it was solid ground. Trigger asks his friends if they see the man as well, and to his surprise they do not. No one but Trigger sees this man.

His family and school ends up thinking he is a problem child looking for attention so they send him to a creepy therapist who gives him pills that Trigger has never heard of before. These pills make the hooded man cease to appear to him and every thing seems to get progressively better until he is visited by the hooded man one night in his room. The man walks trough the wall into Triggers room and asks Trigger to return to BCE with him. Trigger claims the man is not real and tries to take more pills. The hooded man takes the pill container away and crushes it in his hands.

Then Trigger wakes up to find the pills crushed on the floor. He later walks in on his family having a nice conversation when existence its self shatters around him revealing the horrible scene of the massacre of his family. His parents and sister were torn to pieces in his living room by a man with a digital mask and a large white suit of armor.

If you would like to read more please visit our site. http://bodycrusherenterprises.net

You can also check some of the cool videos and songs made for BCE at Body Crusher Enterprises Youtube page http://www.youtube.com/user/frgmn618?feature=mhum.
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PostSubject: The BCE Tales:   Sun Feb 26, 2012 3:28 am

So alot has changed since these first few post were made about BCE. IT has been decided to make the bce store into a three part series. A Prequel, The first book and a sequel. The Series will be called The BCE Tales. The full titles are as follows: The BCE Tales: The Back Logs, The BCE Tales: Body Crusher Enterprises, The BCE Tales: Pure World Inc.

Here are some previews from each book.

The back logs:
Alphonse made his way into the first floor of PWI. He walked along the center walkway calmly until he had reached the center of the room. He looked around at all the desks and offices. He adjusted his tie then looked back up.

“Everyone this is you Boss Alphonse Stova. I want you all out of my FUCKING BUILDING NOW!” Alphonse roared.

Everyone in the room stopped what they were doing and looked towards their boss. They were all speechless and no one moved.

“Did I stutter, GET THE FUCK OUT!” Alphonse roared once more.

This time everyone quickly and quietly left the building. Alphonse walked up to the reception desk and lifted a small intercom device sitting on the desk.

“For everyone else in the building who hasn't herd. I have just fired all of the first floor staff. Everyone else in the building is also fired. If you do not leave I will have security escort you out. Yes that means security is still employed.” Alphonse shouted this order into the mic then looked at the woman behind the desk.

“Sir... what.. why?” The woman stuttered.

“I told you, your fucking fired. You had your chance to leave.” Alphonse said with a grin on his face.

Alphonse pulled a gun, that had been concealed, out of his pants. He raised it and pointed it at the woman's head. Without hesitation he pulled the trigger. He watched as the woman's face imploded like a watermelon. Her blood and pieces of her brain covered the wall behind her.

Alphonse laughed heavily as people from all 64 floor flooded out of the two employee elevators. As soon as each employee saw the dead woman they ran for the door. Alphonse continued to laugh as he watched a man leave the crowd and fall in-front of him. The man was lengthy with greasy black hair and a dark gray dress suit on.

“Sir Alphonse Stova. I must confess that I use to hate you. Siting at my desk talking to idiots everyday and watching you walk in and out of the building as you pleased. I even considered killing you a few times. Now I'm not quite sure what has caused you to change or what plans you have in store but I like it. What ever your plans are for the future I want in on it. From here on out I serve you and only you. Just promise me you will do something about this disgusting world we live in.” The lengthy man said.

“A so my first subordinate comes to me. Well I can promise you more than that, I'm going to destroy this world. You will be by my side. Now tell me your name!” Alphonse ordered.

“My old name is not worthy, Call me Salthazar.” Salthazar said proudly.

“Good, Salthazar it is then. From here on out you will call me sir or my lord. I don't want to here the name Alphonse every again. You got that?” Alphonse asked.

“YES SIR.” Salthazar shouted as he stood up and put his hand to his chest.

Alphonse stood next to Salthazar and watched as all of the ex-employees left the building. Alphonse threw his head back and laughed his ass off!

Body Crusher Enterprises:
By this point Trigger was seventeen and just like the majority of other high school students, he didn’t care much for the future. He sits in class vaguely paying attention, telling himself that education is pointless. Before long the students are shuffled outside for small break from classes just before lunch. Trigger made his way to where his friends were gathered and they resumed their aforementioned discussion.

Just as the discussion was hitting an all time low, Trigger noticed something out of the corner of his eyes. To his right was a small forest that lined one half of the school yard and to the left was a fence that separated the yard from the parking lot. As he gazed upon the fence, Trigger rubbed his eyes in disbelief.

He watched as a tall man walked across the top of the fence in a large black and red trench coat, completely unfitting to the blistering heat boring down on the students that stood outside of the shade. The man also wore a hood that protruded out from under the collar of the coat and covered most of his head and face. The last few things Trigger noticed before he turned away were the dark black jeans the man was wearing and a patch that was sewn on to one of the man’s shoulders. The patch had a strange skull with large horns pointing towards a ball of energy set above a set of letters that read “B.C.E”.

Pure World Inc.:
The man no older than 25 stood in front of the window looking out on the city in the distance. He was standing in an old abandoned house used as a over night stop. The house only had one floor. Most of the windows except for this one were boarded up. There was nothing but paper and dirt now scattered around the house.

The man was wearing a dark blue hoodie and a pair of dark blue jeans. The hoodie was pulled up concealing his face. On the front of the hoodie was a symbol sewn on near his chest. The symbol was of a skull with large horns and energy ball floating above its head. No words were written under this skull.

The man was not alone in the house there was another man much older than the first. This second man was wearing a tattered, stripped, button up shirt. He was also wearing a pair of black khaki pants. What was really strange about this man was that he had a neck but his head was concealed by a large Cylindrical mask. The mask was different it completely surrounded his head as if it were a bucket without a top or bottom. The mask at one time shined with and electrical blue color. Now the mask only had a faint dark blue color. The mask also contained a pair of round white eyes and a line for a mouth. The mouth was straight as if the wearer was trying to convey no emotions.

“Some times I wonder. If I had realized what my stepfather made me into sooner could I have save my brother? Could I have save my only nephew from this torment, this life of hell. But alas I thought my brother was dead, and at the time my anger like what my stepfather was spewing from his dreadful mouth.” The man in the mask said.

“That's all in the past now Joshua. Now it is time to defeat the man once called Alphonse, where ever he maybe.” The first man said.

“So your still going to call me Joshua, I can't convince you other wise?” Joshua, the man in the mask asked.

“Nope, and there is no point in discussing this any further. Lets go!”
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PostSubject: Awesome!!!!   Sun Feb 26, 2012 3:30 am

If you're interested in BCE read some of the chapters and let me know what you think^.^
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